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Second photo from the photo-session with Catarina.

The remaning photos from this session are all available at my Flickr: [link]
Feel free to suggest onother photo to be uploaded here on dA.
I hope you like it. :heart:

Thank you in advanced for the constructive critiques!


Model: Catarina Fernandes
Photography & post-production: me




©Ana Cruz 2009
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Critiques


:iconseduced-by-the-sun:
A minha segunda critica lol!

adorei a pose, é realmente bonita, e o ângulo que foste a procura resultou muito bem! Uma vez mais acho importante destacar as cores, porque a saturação está mesmo muito bem feita e ver tudo no contexto tem realmente um impacto maravilhoso!
Adorei o Foco, e como chegaste ao Blur, fica muito melhor o destaque de planos neste caso, do que uma imagem toda focada!

a unica coisa que realmente me incomoda mas isso tem haver uma vez mais com apenas a minha opção pessoal! foi teres cortado as mãos! Apreendi com dois fotógrafos de moda, a dosagem do que se vê no corpo, e fiquei muito "limitada" quando vejo cortes, que não fazem parte dos que apreendi claro que não significa que são errados! apenas não estou habituada aprecia-los.

:) beijinhos

ps: espero que a minha contribuição seja útil!
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I will agree with the rest of the critiques that this is a very lovely photo. The lighting is perfect and makes her skin glow and lets her hair color shine. Her skin seems almost flawless. I say almost due to the fact that my eyes went to her elbow and nails. But to be honest my eyes went straight to her chest when I saw this photo. Perhaps it's the fact that her back is arched on the stairs, but her breasts seem to be the main focus. Which I know you didn't mean to do so, but it is. Her dress is very lovely and it would have been better if she was on her stomach and looking towards the camera with a dreamy gaze. I do like the fact that her hands are locked together in a sense, it shows some sort of shield. Her eyebrows seem to be frowning in this angle which creates tensity in the photo.
No matter what, this photo is lovely. Her face is very angelic and the environment is relaxing. You picked a lovely model.
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