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First photo from the session with my friend Catarina. We spent the most amazing afternoon and had lots of fun.
This will be my first photo open to Critique so, be true but don't be harsh. I need your help to improve and grow. I disabled standart comments for this one. Feel free to give me a critique and help me. Thank you and, I hope you like it. Model: Catarina Fernandes Photography and post-production: me Other photos from this session on my Flickr: [link] ©Ana Cruz 2009 This image is registered and protected by MyFreeCopyright.com and SafeCreative.org All rights of this image are reserved to `LuneBleu aka Ana Cruz and may not be used in ANY way without my written permission. No copying - No redistribution - No unauthorized use. Thank you! |
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July 13
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Canon EOS 450D 1/12 second F/16.0 18 mm 400 Jul 9, 2009, 5:55:36 PM Share
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A photo of someone bathing in the sun would more come to me as with more light, I could have imagine more light coming onto her skin because seeing her there laying on the grass but still behind the trees completely covered and protected from the sun simply confuses the whole concept to me and it doesn't give it as much impact as I thought a photo with that conceptuality should have.
sun = light, she's not even being hit by the sun, the pose that she's got is a nice one, nevertheless I am not very fond of the whole angle because is not telling me much, I would really see this from another angle, maybe showing her beautiful face, if she has one that is
anyway keep up the good work Ana you'll get much better with time and remember I am not a photographer, I just give opinions
Adorei as cores, ó
a única coisa que para mim falha, é a inclinação do terreno, no meu gosto pessoal, acho que fica demais, já temos a luz as cores fortes, ela deitada, o movimento do cabelo, as proprias manchas de luz na relva.
Parabéns
ps: espero que não leves a mal
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