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First photo from the session with my friend Catarina. We spent the most amazing afternoon and had lots of fun.

This will be my first photo open to Critique so, be true but don't be harsh. I need your help to improve and grow.
I disabled standart comments for this one. Feel free to give me a critique and help me. :D
Thank you and, I hope you like it. :heart:


Model: Catarina Fernandes
Photography and post-production: me
Other photos from this session on my Flickr: [link]






©Ana Cruz 2009
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All rights of this image are reserved to `LuneBleu aka Ana Cruz and may not be used in ANY way without my written permission. No copying - No redistribution - No unauthorized use. Thank you!

Critiques


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Well here I come, let's see, I am no expert in this thing of the critiques on photographies, I suppose that I'll start by the concept, I will take this from the name because there is no much explanation in the description.

A photo of someone bathing in the sun would more come to me as with more light, I could have imagine more light coming onto her skin because seeing her there laying on the grass but still behind the trees completely covered and protected from the sun simply confuses the whole concept to me and it doesn't give it as much impact as I thought a photo with that conceptuality should have.

sun = light, she's not even being hit by the sun, the pose that she's got is a nice one, nevertheless I am not very fond of the whole angle because is not telling me much, I would really see this from another angle, maybe showing her beautiful face, if she has one that is :) and I bet she does, so...

anyway keep up the good work Ana you'll get much better with time and remember I am not a photographer, I just give opinions :blowkiss:
The Artist thought this was FAIR
11 out of 11 deviants thought this was fair.

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Como é em português vou dar a minha primeira critica lol
Adorei as cores, ó;ptima saturação, a luz do sol, é uma peça fantástica nesta composição. Espero ver em breve o resto da sessão.

a única coisa que para mim falha, é a inclinação do terreno, no meu gosto pessoal, acho que fica demais, já temos a luz as cores fortes, ela deitada, o movimento do cabelo, as proprias manchas de luz na relva.

Parabéns :)

ps: espero que não leves a mal :P adorava receber mais criticas, iria apreender tanto :D por causa de ti vou meter uma foto de uma sessão fotografica.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
8 out of 8 deviants thought this was fair.

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Jul 9, 2009, 5:55:36 PM

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